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Improves the copy for the new app screen (#24918)
Summary: 1. Consistency with full stops (you can see screenshots in #24783 ) 2. Improvements to the wording, describing what you're going to see ## Changelog [Internal] [Fixed] - Improves the copy for the new app screen Pull Request resolved: #24918 Differential Revision: D15391421 Pulled By: cpojer fbshipit-source-id: 2ec6d2d5bd4845c5f4c699838ae865ab4217e49e
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Libraries/NewAppScreen/components/LearnMoreLinks.js

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{
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title: 'The Basics',
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link: 'https://facebook.github.io/react-native/docs/tutorial',
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description:
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'Read the docs on what to do once seen how to work in React Native.',
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description: 'Explains a Hello World for React Native.',
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},
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{
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title: 'Style',
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link: 'https://facebook.github.io/react-native/docs/style',
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description: 'All of the core components accept a prop named style.',
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description:
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'Covers how to use the prop named style which controls the visuals.',
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},
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{
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title: 'Layout',
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link: 'https://facebook.github.io/react-native/docs/flexbox',
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description:
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'A component can specify the layout of its children using the flexbox specification.',
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description: 'React Native uses flexbox for layout, learn how it works.',
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},
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{
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title: 'Components',

Libraries/NewAppScreen/components/ReloadInstructions.js

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ios: () => (
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<Text>
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Press <Text style={styles.highlight}>Cmd+R</Text> in the simulator to
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reload your app's code
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reload your app's code.
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</Text>
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),
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default: () => (
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<Text>
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Double tap <Text style={styles.highlight}>R</Text> on your keyboard to
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reload your app's code
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reload your app's code.
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</Text>
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),
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});

template/App.js

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<View style={styles.sectionContainer}>
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<Text style={styles.sectionTitle}>Learn More</Text>
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<Text style={styles.sectionDescription}>
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Read the docs on what to do once seen how to work in React
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Native.
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Read the docs to discover what to do next:
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</Text>
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</View>
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<LearnMoreLinks />

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